Отредактируйте пожалуйста письмо со стороны грамматики: My favorite character is Vasilisa from a book "Chasodei". She is very tall with red hair and she has a red and black wings. After her 14 birthdays, her father took daughter to his home planet, Eflara. She began to learn to manage a time there. And she started to get. At the end of the history, Vasilisa and Fesh became the masters of time.

Vasilisa from the book
has red and black, не нужен артикль a
14 birthday