Пожалуйста, найдите ошибки: my name is Julia. I am fourteenth years old. l was born on the fourteenth of April. I have lather, father and sister. I dont like animals, so I do not have a pet. But I make to learn something new.Im in the ninth grade. We study last of the subjects at school, but my favorite subject is literature. When I read a book, I have a lot of emotions. Its very important for me, because I am very emotional person.My favorite season of year is autumn. I like rainy weather and wind.Sometimes I like to be alone. Because at this time I can to think about many things.Music plays an important role in my life. I listen : rock, instrumental music, ballads, k pop and many others. I think, what music can influence people

Второе предложение. не fourteen без th на конце. дальше... эм... lather это типа mother? 6 предложение. не make а want. 8 не last а lots и the не надо.
дальше все вроде правильно. в конце. там, где ты говоришь почему любишь побыть в одиночестве. там не can to а просто can.
в остальном вроде все верно.