Помогите, пожалуйста, нужно небольшое сочинение на английском на тему : "в настоящее время молодые люди начинают свою первую работу в более позднем возрасте, чем их родители"

Nowadays young people start their first job much later than their parents because of education. if you want to work on well-paid job you should have a good education so people spend much time for education and start job later. In my opinion thats right because well have qualified employees